Nature's winged creatures flutter
They fly together harmoniously around the world
In serenity and tranquility
The doves begin to gather
Their innocence and purity
The perfection of the world
Nature's cooperation
Peace
It all begins to scatter
As they make room for the chaos
And War
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The rhythm of this line is off "They fly together harmoniously around the world"
Doves are a bit cliche.
Try include some more interesting imagery here. At this point the poem is quite cliche.
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